This photo is beautiful and i love the thoughtfulness of her position. the only big thing i see is that the lighting could be a little better. it doesn't have enough lighting from the top. the right side of her face and shoulder/neck are too dark/shadowed. you could also possibly make her eyes slightly brighter, but thats just my personal preference. i love that its all her natural beauty and that it appears that she doesnt have much, if any, makeup on. Other than that, great photo =] i love how the bright colors are focused around her face and the rest are more neutral.